Room four was given a job to get Adrenalin writing finished in one week. Adrenalin writing is when you hop into someone's body in your brain and write about how it would feel. It was fun learning a new type of writing and learning a new skill in writing. Room four had to watch a video clip and then pretend they are in the person's body.
Kia ora Riley,
ReplyDeleteExcellent detail and describing words
Thank you John I hope you like my blog.
DeleteKia ora, I am Ari from Makauri School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the way you described the way the boat moved through the water.
My favourite part was when you described when you past the flaming boat.
Maybe you could make the story longer I really wanted to hear the end.
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Mā te wā
Ari
Thank you Ari for looking at my blog I also like your's to.
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