Looks like A big jagged mountain.
Smells like a lots of people.
Tastes like fun history.
Feels like smooth concrete.
Sounds like lots of people talking.
Lives in Te Papa
By Riley Knight
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HI my name is jimi I like your poem BUT you could think of more bald thinking you know like I could hear the amazement of all the other people
ReplyDeleteand your spelling kind of needs work apart from that its real cool and just something new.