Friday, 28 September 2018

Te Papa Poem

We had to write a poem about the location we're going to in Wellington. It was fun writing a poem because I learnt new ways of to write poems and ways of describing it.

Looks like A big jagged mountain.
Smells like a lots of people.
Tastes like fun history.
Feels like smooth concrete.
Sounds like lots of people talking.
Lives in Te Papa

By Riley Knight

1 comment:

  1. HI my name is jimi I like your poem BUT you could think of more bald thinking you know like I could hear the amazement of all the other people
    and your spelling kind of needs work apart from that its real cool and just something new.

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