Thursday, 6 December 2018

Zapping savage


I’m a mouse. A gray and pink mouse and I’m here to survive. There’s a lizard. A scaly lizard and he’s here to eat. Then there’s a hawk. A evil vicious hawk and she’s here to kill.
There’s a movement in the stones and a lizard slowly emerges. A ant comes up  and crawls up to its eyes then his slimy tongue comes up then, MUNCH! The ant is gone. Squawk, squawk three hawk's around me. A hawk lands at the entrance of my hole and a giant spider comes out from the other end of my hole. Now I have no choice but to runn! I can feel all the adrenaline pumping through my veins and I can hear the hawk right behind me.
Running as fast as I can I ram into a stick but I keep going. The hawk gets closer by the second and my heart gets fast every millor second. I find a little hole in the side of the hill and I run into it. The hawk is rummaging through the stones it gets closer, I have to get out of there. I sneak out of a little hole and runn!!!
A few seconds after that the hawk sees me and I have to pick up the pace. The hawk is a tale length behind me and I have to get away from it. The hawk lands so close to me I can feel the air behind me from the hawk. I run into some skulls and the hawk gives up. I am now safe from all the drama.

By Riley Knight



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