Today I was learning about slow writing.
I enjoyed writing about Taniwha.
I found it challenging to use the right words in my writing.
My digital learning object shows I know how to slow write.
Next time I would change some of my descriptive words.
This post shows I am a Stepping Up blogger.
Claws like the sharpest butchers knives.
Quickly running to his harakeke home in the great bush.
Swiftly chasing the meaty stag for dinner.
At home saying to his wife, “I must go and hunt for food at the creek.”
Trees in his way as he ran to the fresh trout.
He has a long, wormy body as he looks for food.
By Riley Knight
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