Ghostly, swiftly, I sneak out of my cave
Into the darkness of the river;
roaming beneath the tangled trees,
I jump for fresh, smelly bait for my hungry belly,
Creeping around the river bed.
Quietly I head up to the shadows of the children,
I eye the big, juicy venison,
SNAP! I chomp down the meat.
I silently head back to my cave with my belly full.
Hi Riley,
ReplyDeleteI really like your strong descriptive words that you used. It's a really good way of describing a eel.
Great job.