Monday, 2 September 2019

EEL



Ghostly, swiftly, I sneak out of my cave 
Into the darkness of the river;
roaming beneath the tangled trees,
I jump for fresh, smelly bait for my hungry belly, 
Creeping around the river bed.
Quietly I head up to the shadows of the children,
I eye the big, juicy venison,
SNAP! I chomp down the meat.
I silently head back to my cave with my belly full.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Riley,
    I really like your strong descriptive words that you used. It's a really good way of describing a eel.
    Great job.

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