Tuesday, 15 October 2019

Where am I

I see... a big strong tree holding up with planks of wood.

I feel… bark as I climb up and up the mighty working tree with the sun rays shining done on me.

I smell… nature's fresh air and sweat.

I hear… voices chatting around me, banging hammers and sawing saws.

I taste… fruit, chips, cookies and sandwiches. 

Where am I?

 Building a tree hut
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5 comments:

  1. Anonymous5 November 2019 at 09:26

    Kia ora my name is Melody I go to Gisborne Intermediate.
    I really liked your explanation eg smell, hear, taste and your punctuation is on form.
    I learnt what you did in the holidays & how you built the treehouse.
    Maybe you could write a paragraph adding more details, like who you did it with, how long did it take.
    Please visit my blog
    here

    Mā te wā
    Melody

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  2. Anonymous3 June 2020 at 10:02

    I like how you say every thing you fell and what is around you, and the picure is cool

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  3. Anonymous3 June 2020 at 10:05

    Thanks Dylan

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  4. Anonymous3 June 2020 at 10:05

    I like how you say that you are eating chips, fruit, cookies and sandwitches and not just, I taste the food in my mouth

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    1. Anonymous3 June 2020 at 10:10

      Thanks Dylan thats cool that you notice that.

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